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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

With every new chapter, this story just gets better and better, Kyle. You've got a winner here. Terrific writing. I'm really enjoying this. - Jim

Kyle Leonard's avatar

Thank you so much for saying that. I deeply appreciate all of your support and encouragement.

Janice Anne Wheeler's avatar

The suspense you're building is no small task in the writing world. Well done!

Kyle Leonard's avatar

This build up was one I perseverated about for a long time. I tried to put myself in the reader's place. Am I holding my cards too close? Am I letting the story unfold too slowly or quickly...

I really appreciate your feedback. 🙏